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The Neolithic Dream, p1

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This is the first part of a 9-page minicomic I'm drawing. Since I mostly started this to practice drawing a comic, I didn't feel like making up a whole story for it, so I decided to take a dream I had a while ago as story.
For a dream, this one was quite straight forward. However, since it's still a dream, not everything that happens is logical and it doesn't have a nice, closed ending. I changed some small things (like the dialogue and soms little things to make it flow better), but this is mostly how it went.

So, about this first page:
- It's Arya, my pokémontrainer character! She was the main character in the dream, even though it had nothing to do with pokémon xD
- Planning the panels is much more difficult than I expected.
- Drawing one page also takes much longer than I expected. Especially the colours.
- Shoes, why did I start with shoes D: I found a very helpful reference, though, and I think it turned out okay.
- Faces. Well. Let's just not look at them for too long.
- I like how the colours turned out, though :3

The shoe reference was this one: fav.me/d719d5m

Next: fav.me/dagf1k0
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EvveyLee's avatar
Whoah it's a great idea to make a comic based on a dream! In my experience, dreams with a story always leave a certain feeling that is hard to shake off and makes me restless, as if it was really important and I need to use it in some way. But ever since I lost my dream journal I'm too lazy to write them down and then I slowly forget about them.

Shoes from the back are indeed really hard to draw, but they look fine and it's immediately clear what we're looking at.
I'm really curious where this story is going!